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Homework Help: English/reporting

Posted by Blaze on Sunday, December 9, 2012 at 7:39pm.

I need this paragraph proofread
To test Erdmanís statement, Deja Guinn, a Christian and senior at WMU decided to join the SSA group. Guinn says unlike most of the group members, who are atheist agnostic, she is a Christian and believes in how Jesus Christ would see the world. However, Guinn says she decided to join to group as an underdog to share her point of views on topics from a religious standpoint, and also to enhance her knowledge of an atheistís perspective on things.

what other word could I use besides underdog? and how could I better that sentence? also I need help revising the last sentence.
If you see any other errors let me know..
Thanks

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