Posted by Kim on Sunday, December 9, 2012 at 4:00pm.
Odysseus was brave from the rest of the crew<~~I don't know what that's supposed to mean so he led us into fooling Cyclops. He gave some wine to Cyclops to get him drunk. Then Odysseus, a couple of the crew members, and I stabbed Cyclops in the eye. Also, Cyclops asked Odysseus, "Who are you?" Odysseus replied, "I’m Nohbdy.” So when the other Cyclops’<~~?? what does the Cyclops possess? came to help Cyclops<~~comma needed here he said, ”Nohbdy ruined me!”
Cyclops = singular
Cyclopes = plural
Odysseus was BRAVER THAN the rest of the crew [I'm assuming this is what you meant] so he led us TO FOOL Cyclops. He gave some wine to Cyclops to get him drunk. Then Odysseus, a couple of the crew, and *I* stabbed Cyclops in the eye. Also [perhaps THEN or synonyms would be a better word to use here], Cyclops asked Odysseus who he was and he replied, "I'm Nohbdy." so when the other cyclopes came to help Cyclops, [<-insert comma] he said, "Nohbdy ruined me!"
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