Homework Help: english

Posted by Kim on Sunday, December 9, 2012 at 3:55pm.

does this sound write and look grammatically correct? Please and thank you
Odysseus the Curious took us inside a cave to eat. After we ate some cheeses the ugly Cyclops came along with his flock of sheep and rams. He put a gigantic boulder to block the exit of the cave. The whole crew was scared because we were stuck with a man-eating “thing.”

english - Writeacher, Sunday, December 9, 2012 at 4:22pm
"cheese" not "cheeses"!

comma after "cheese"

Use "moved" rather than "put"

Everything else sounds fine.
english - Kim, Sunday, December 9, 2012 at 4:26pm
thanks
english - Writeacher, Sunday, December 9, 2012 at 4:27pm
You're welcome.

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