Homework Help: Language

Posted by Dawn on Monday, December 3, 2012 at 8:27pm.

I need to correct the following sentence and I havving trouble with it!
This is how it is written and there is to be 6 corrections at least in it.

out no loitering screamed grubble the greedy shopkeeper

This is how I think it should be am I right??? "Out!" "No loitering", screamed Grubble, the gready shopkeeper.

Language - Ms. Sue, Monday, December 3, 2012 at 8:34pm
It's right -- except for this change.

"No loitering!"

http://www.glencoe.com/sec/writerschoice/rws/mslessons/grade6/lesson30/index.shtml

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