Homework Help: English Thesis Statement

Posted by Sahil on Wednesday, November 14, 2012 at 2:37pm.

Critique my thesis please?

Sartre uses the ideas he lays out in “Self-Deception” in his short story “The Wall” to establish the connection between bad faith and living toward death, and to reject the Freudian notion of the unconscious in favor of the idea that individuals have complete conscious access to the genesis of and reasons for all actions, though they may choose to ignore this knowledge.

English Thesis Statement - Writeacher, Wednesday, November 14, 2012 at 2:49pm
WAAAAAAYYYY too long!

What's the central idea you want to convince others of?
English Thesis Statement - Writeacher, Wednesday, November 14, 2012 at 2:52pm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

These are two of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. The second one shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into a real thesis statement.
English Thesis Statement - Sahil, Wednesday, November 14, 2012 at 2:54pm
Thank you!
English Thesis Statement - Writeacher, Wednesday, November 14, 2012 at 3:08pm
You're welcome.

Once you have your thesis statement pared down to the central idea, please feel free to re-post if you want one of us to check it for you.

=)

Answer this Question

Related Questions

english - thesis - I have to write the introduction to literary essay on The ...
English - I writing a compare/contrast essay on movie i watched that be smke ...
Thesis statement - How do I write a thesis statement about why I choose Medical ...
english - K im not trying to cheat or nothing but im doing this exam im not ...
English College composition I - I need help on writing a thesis statement about ...
n&w - for my research paper on Diet and Diabetes, i need to write a thesis ...
English - I need a thesis statment for an esaay. I have read the short story &...
English - Thesis Statement on Life of Pi - a) how is life of pi a story within a...
english - i need help please. What does Thomas F. Walsh, Jr's thesis propose...
english - i still don't know a good thesis statement for: students helping ...

For Further Reading

First Name:
School Subject:
Answer: