Here's the second one:
Please check to see if there any grammar errors and if it's good.
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Urban Unit 2012 - Stand and Deliver Response
Would you be willing to give up your mornings, afternoons, and weekends, and a good part of your summer to prove to yourself that you could pass a test? To the students in the class, was this just a test or was it something more?
I'm willing to give up my mornings, afternoons, and weekends, and a good part of my summer to prove to myself that I could pass a test, if it's a big test, something really important. If it's not important then I'm not going to waste my time. To the students in the class, it's not just a test, it was something more. They're taking an AP exam. Colleges they apply will be seeing their test scores to see if they understand the concept they are learning.
English 8R - Homework Check - Part 2 - Ms. Sue, Monday, November 12, 2012 at 6:12pm
Also -- students who pass an AP test get college credit for that class.
I don't see any grammatical mistakes. :-)
English 8R - Homework Check - Part 2 - bobpursley, Monday, November 12, 2012 at 6:17pm
Wouldn't it depend on what you are giving up? You are not giving up "summer", You are giving up other things, such as activities. Would you give up a world cruise? Would you give up a trip to Europe with your girl scout troop?
I would explore what giving up a Summer means. If you are giving up cartoons, and sleeping to noon, that is quite different from a giving up a great adventure.
English 8R - Homework Check - Part 2 - Laruen, Monday, November 12, 2012 at 6:21pm
You have a point bobpursley
and thanks for that extra detail Ms. Sue
thank you soo much! :)
English 8R - Homework Check - Part 2 - Ms. Sue, Monday, November 12, 2012 at 6:37pm
You're very welcome.