Posted by Laruen on Monday, November 12, 2012 at 5:48pm.
Looks good. I've made a couple of corrections (in boldface).
I learned a lot from the movie. I learned that you should try to challenge yourself in life and that school is really important. Without education your life is affected in many ways. Everybody needs to be able to read and write in order to make a living. People who don't have any education, not just reading and writing skills, but also math and science, will not get very far in life or in any dreams of what they want to do with their life. Education is important in the process of learning, working, and living. If I was in the same situation, I would retake the exam to prove myself that I could pass a test.
thank you
it said it should be at one written page
so... is this is good enough????
I don't think that will take a full page. What do you think you can add to it?
it said AT LEAST
but the question said to write a paragraph..... oops I forgot one detail!!! I'm going to check it, meanwhile please reply my other post (health and english)
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