Posted by Claire on Sunday, November 4, 2012 at 10:17pm.
Yes.
"Despite my eagerness" doesn't belong with "I was excited."
You could insert "though" after "excited."
Ok, thanks so much Ms. Sue!
I'm sorry to bother again but would this work?
Despite my eagerness for the day to end, I was excited about the “surprise” guest the school had booked to make this day special for our graduating class.
Yes. That's very good!
Ah Yay! Thank you (:
You're welcome. :-)
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