Posted by Sanya on .
So, if I spend about 5-6 minutes planning what else would I write except for a couple of bullet points about my two main examples? Would it just be this:
Is that it?
Also, I think I need help as Mr. Pursley indicated earlier, in sentence structure. I have never been an amazing English or writing student- so any sort of website or even basic tips on how to condense my writing would really help. Thank you both so much.
Critiques cont'd -
You need to end up with a minimum of 4 paragraphs, 5 would be better:
1. Intro -- about 4 sentences; 4th sentence is your thesis statement
2. Full paragraph (7-8 sentences) developing one of your main points
3. Full paragraph (7-8 sentences) developing one of your main points
4. Concl -- about 4 sentences, echoing your conclusion and making your final point.
Go here: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/
Go into the Essay and Research Paper section and read the section called STRUCTURAL CONSIDERATIONS. Read all the other parts, too, if you can.