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grammar - sentence structure

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I was wondering if you could tell me if my sentence structure using ":" and quotations is correct...

Furthermore, when Howard states: “If I had a spot, I'd slap you in” (54:14), and “everybody has to pull his own weight” (54:30), he uses the aggressive motions of slapping and pulling to emphasize his point.

OR should i structure it like this...

Furthermore, when Howard states, “If I had a spot, I'd slap you in” (54:14), and, “everybody has to pull his own weight” (54:30), he uses the aggressive motions of slapping and pulling to emphasize his point.

if I am wrong on both could you please tell me how. thank you!

  • grammar - sentence structure - ,

    #1 - DO NOT use a colon immediately after a verb.

    #2 - What are those numbers in parentheses?

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