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Homework Help: grammar - sentence structure

Posted by Cynthia on Friday, October 26, 2012 at 8:36pm.

I was wondering if you could tell me if my sentence structure using ":" and quotations is correct...

Furthermore, when Howard states: “If I had a spot, I'd slap you in” (54:14), and “everybody has to pull his own weight” (54:30), he uses the aggressive motions of slapping and pulling to emphasize his point.

OR should i structure it like this...

Furthermore, when Howard states, “If I had a spot, I'd slap you in” (54:14), and, “everybody has to pull his own weight” (54:30), he uses the aggressive motions of slapping and pulling to emphasize his point.

if I am wrong on both could you please tell me how. thank you!

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