sentence and paragraph
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8–12 sentences..You’ve applied for a specific job in your field of study. The Human Resources Department arranges an
interview and tells you to bring with you a polished piece of writing for them to evaluate your writing
skills. The paragraph must describe one particular experience you’ve had that inspired you or guided
you to choose the type of position for which you applied.
Your audience is your potential employer and your purpose is to show you have thought carefully
about what and/or who has motivated you toward this career choice and why. In addition, you want
to convey your enthusiasm for this position as it relates to your inspiring experience. Take time to
think about what your audience wants to know and strive to reach a balance between informal and
formal business writing.
this what I have so far , I am at a total loss ..
I am looking forward to transitioning into the new position as a medical coder, which has been open within the coding department, that I have currently been working as a clerk. By assuming the role as a clerk, my duties have allowed me the opportunity to help the coders with looking up documentation in order for them to finish coding a patient’s account. In the process of helping the coders looking for documentation it became clear to me that I enjoyed the research with in the patients chart. Along with the position of being a clerk for the Coding department I was also lucky enough to be assigned eLearning modules through McStrategies, I was enrolled in the same modules as the coders, by doing these eLearning modules, reinforced my decision to pursue a career in Medical Billing and Coding. While doing the eLearning modules I found a new appreciation for reading, researching, using a CPT book to look up codes and extreme satisfaction that I was able to code from Doctors notes with accuracy. By using a CPT book and reading the Doctors notes and compare what they were saying to the book, my results for these eLearning modules were extremely well considering I knew very little about coding. My experience as a clerk for the Coding Department was the driving force into my decision to pursue this new career. I am looking forward to apply me new skills in a career that I know I will enjoy.
suggestions on how to put this together .