Posted by **rawr... im a dinosaur.... rawr** on Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:29pm.

So I'm doing a project called Equality Matters. I decided to try and use my writing abilities to help me. Can you check this poem?

To Be Who You Are Meant To Be:

Equality Matters

People tell me to be who I want

And to be what I need

So whats wrong if I'm an LGBT?

No one understands what equality means

To me its being who you're meant to be

Even though I'm not straight

My friends and family still think I'm great

I'm taking a chance to show the truth

I'm on of of the LGBT youth

I want to spread the value

Of you just being you

This is strictly opinion, but do you think it gets my point across in a professional manner?

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**rawr... im a dinosaur.... rawr**, Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:30pm
I'm only 13, so I know it's not great. I'd also like some pointers if possible.

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**Ms. Sue**, Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:36pm
It's excellent!!

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**rawr... im a dinosaur.... rawr**, Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:36pm
Thanks,

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**rawr... im a dinosaur.... rawr**, Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:41pm
Ms. Sue, are there any sites that may help me with my project?

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**Ms. Sue**, Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:46pm
If you want to continue this poem, you could point out that you can think, work, and do everything else that straight people do. People must accept this and work and play along side everyone.

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**rawr... im a dinosaur.... rawr**, Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:49pm
OKay, thank you so much Ms. SUe.

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**Ms. Sue**, Friday, October 12, 2012 at 8:54pm
You're very welcome. You might also mention marriage should be between two people who love each other.

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