I writing narrative story on theme that With independence comes amplified accountability. teacher say it be good if it be third person narrative. though i not know what to write about, teacher show us example and one which a girl write be through a birds point of view, and the bird want to learn to fly, one day the birds mom pass away, and its siblings hatch out of eggs, they be crying, so the bird need to giddy up and fly to feed its siblings and it do it, and it be a new beginning. this story have lot of description and teacher say this story hve to give vivid picture of everything. i want to write something similar to this, but teacher say it be hard to write in third person, so what i write about that be easy to write in third person? i want to be something similar to bird story cause it be very interesting how she write from bird view. i thought of writing abt little boy who get lost at airport, but someone else took that idea.

Anything can be written good in 3rd person! I like the idea of using a little boy lost at the airport; sorry it was taken. Maybe you could write about a young child going through a rough time in his/her family. ( you know: maybe a death in the family or parents are getting divorced?) Something touching like that

Thanks I like the ideas :)

Writing in the third person can be challenging at first, but with some practice and guidance, you can definitely create an engaging narrative. Since you're looking for a story idea that is similar to the bird story your teacher showed you, I have a suggestion for you. You could write a narrative from the perspective of a stray or lost dog.

In this story, the dog could face a similar situation to the bird in terms of independence and accountability. You can explore how the dog navigates through different environments and encounters various challenges while trying to find its way home or establish a new life. It could meet different characters, both other animals and humans, who impact its journey.

To make the story vivid and engaging, you can describe the dog's sensory experiences, such as how it perceives scents, sounds, and the surrounding environment. This will help the reader visualize the world from the dog's perspective. Additionally, you can depict the dog's emotions and thoughts, showing how it learns and adapts to its changing circumstances.

Remember to maintain consistency in your storytelling by staying in the third person throughout the narrative. This means using pronouns like "he" or "she" instead of first-person pronouns like "I" or "me." This perspective will allow your readers to connect with the protagonist and better understand their journey.

Feel free to get creative and add your own unique twists to the story. Writing from a dog's perspective provides an excellent opportunity to explore themes such as loyalty, survival, and the contrasts between the human and animal worlds.

Good luck with your story, and don't be afraid to experiment and have fun with the writing process!