Posted by Gabby on Monday, September 24, 2012 at 3:57pm.
This will give me better confidence, that I no longer have to settle for jobs I am not suited for. >> run-on
Knowing that I can make my dreams become a reality >> fragment
This will help me to better things for me and my family. ???
By providing them with the guidance for a better future, financially and by my own personal example. fragment
Showing even if you failed the first time, always keep trying like I did by getting my high school diploma. >> unclear
I rewrote again, kind of changing a few things please let me know when I need to fix here.
Having a high school diploma is very important to my future. I will no longer feel ashamed, because I was never able to finish my schooling. I will be able to work towards getting the skills I need for the career I want. I will have better confidence . No longer settling for jobs I am not suited for. Knowing that I can make my dreams become a reality to help me better things for me and my family. By providing my family with guidance for their own future . That you can succeed at anything even if I may have failed the first time.
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