Homework Help: English

Posted by Mohammad on Wednesday, September 19, 2012 at 10:11pm.

I am writing my essays and I wrote them but i not know how to start the beginnings of them. this on movie smoke signals. i am writing on themes, but i cant start intro like "in the film .. because someone else be doing that for movie review, so i not know how to start with themes. i want to do something like "there are many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions ?

English - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, September 19, 2012 at 10:14pm
How about --

Many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions.
English - Mohammad, Wednesday, September 19, 2012 at 10:17pm
thanks ms. sue :)
English - correction - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, September 19, 2012 at 10:19pm
You're welcome --

A correction -- eliminate "that" and "feeling of".

Many compelling themes in this movie take you on ride through your own emotions.
English - Mohammad, Wednesday, September 19, 2012 at 10:27pm
Thanks ms. sue :)
English - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, September 19, 2012 at 10:28pm
You're welcome, Mohammad.

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