Posted by Vicky on Friday, August 17, 2012 at 2:22pm.
I need help rewording a sentence:
"Robotics is a broad field"
writing - Ms. Sue, Friday, August 17, 2012 at 2:29pm
Many different technologies are included in robotics.
writing - Vicky, Friday, August 17, 2012 at 2:41pm
Here is another:
Although there is no single definition of the term "robotics" robots are generally considered programmable machines that perform tasks automatically without real-time guidance by humans
writing - Ms. Sue, Friday, August 17, 2012 at 2:43pm
I did the first sentence for you. Now it's your turn.
I'll be glad to check your sentence.
writing - Brett, Friday, August 17, 2012 at 2:50pm
It would help if we knew why you had to reword the sentences. Are you trying to make them more concise? More specific? Reach a certain audience (grade level)?
writing - Vicky, Friday, August 17, 2012 at 2:55pm
Ok This is going to be my open paragraph, please check.
Many different technologies are included in robotics. It combines elements such as mechanics,electronics,computer engineering, programming and artifical intelligence. Robotics is a technology that uses robots to perform tasks without the help the help of humans
writing - Ms. Sue, Friday, August 17, 2012 at 3:04pm
writing - Vicky, Friday, August 17, 2012 at 3:14pm
Brett it is for a 12th grade paper in which I have to summarize an article. The paragraph above is describing the purpose of the article. This is the article
"Robotics." World of Computer Science. Gale, 2002
WHat do you think??
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