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Posted by on Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:06pm.

I'm creating is HUGE book series. Can you check to see if the blurb is good.

The series follows the journey of a teenage girl who is determined to have best year ever in the 8th grade and to have the best 4 year experience in high school.

Please make sure if they any grammar errors. If you have any ideas of making it better I'm ok with it.

Thank You! :)

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:19pm

    It looks good, but I'd say,

    "have the best year . . ."

    "best four-year experience . . ."

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:21pm

    that's good

    thanks

    I just add a few more sentences in the blurb.

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:26pm

    The series follows the journey of a teenage girl who is determined to have best year in the 8th grade and to have the best four-year experience in high school.
    As you read throughout the series you'll get to understand the real truth about teenage life, can relate the problems and things she been through, experiences you can relate, advice to make good decisions in life and to remember your experiences during your teen years! :)

    is that good??
    is there any grammar errors??

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:34pm

    You ignored my advice for adding "the."

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:35pm

    Have you written this series or even one book yet? Blurbs are usually written after a book is written.

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:41pm

    Oh ok.

    I didn't ignore your adivce I must of been a typo or maybe I erase it by mistake.

    I didn't write the book yet. It's a lot to explain. I only wrote the blurb because that's what this whole series mainly about but I may change it after I write the book.

    Thanks anyway for editing it! :) :) :)

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:41pm

    You're welcome.

  • English (plz read) - , Sunday, July 22, 2012 at 3:59pm

    Lauren: Please practice spelling grammar correctly. http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/grammar.html

  • English (plz read) - , Monday, July 30, 2012 at 12:40pm

    here its good but u must write through where u wrote throughout . And it's nice

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