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We are looking for suitable accommodation in south-west Ireland. (on seafront, near Cork) Any ideas?
Can you check these two sentences, Writeacher?

1) Does your hotel offer both a kids’club and a playground where my child can spend time outside?
2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp as well as a playground where my child can spend time outside.

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    Some potential revisions for you ~

    1) Does your hotel offer organized children's activities, with both inside and outside capabilities?

    2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp, as well as a playground where my child can spend free time outside.

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    http://www.cork-guide.ie/

    http://www.tripadvisor.co.uk/Tourism-g186598-County_Cork-Vacations.html

    I'd be all over these websites to find the right hotel in the right place!!

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