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I personally respect every religion, and I love reading holy books. Holy books inspire many people. Holy books taught me many morals and stories on our everyday life, which really helped me, learn what the purpose of us being in this world is. I read the Quran everyday of my life to learn and get inspired from. Reading the Quran is part of my religion, but I read other religious texts for a reason which is knowledge.
The Quran has many stories that inspire me, but one of the stories that I adore is the story of Maryam or Mary. The Quran, Bible, and many other holy books mention Mary in different views and stories. What makes her story really special to me is that Mary was the only women mentioned by name in the Quran. It is also my favorite story because people amazingly are inspired by her in different religions, and languages. She taught me to be patient and always have faith in god.
I love reading stories about miracles and so believe they can happen. Witnessing a miracle is one of my wishes I know will come true. My dad knows how much I love weird, miracles, and true stories. So, when he went to Lebanon he got me this Arabic book called "ÇáÞÕÕ ÇáÛÑíÈå" which means weird stories. This book was a truly amazing gift; it had hundreds of miracles people witnessed. This book specifically talked about people who marvelously met Imam Al-Mahdi (Prophet Mohammad's grandson).
Shīa Muslims believe he is alive, hidden, and will return to bring justice to the world. Imam Al-Mahdi disappeared thousands of years ago and people believe he will come back. One of the stories in this book was about this lady with cancer. She prayed to Imam Al-Mahdi to help her, and she met him in Mecca. He told her to drink Zamzam Water and she will be cured. When she went to the doctor he told her that she was clearly cured from cancer. This woman and thousands of others were saved by this man, and that made me truly believe he is in this world.
Good and evil are always fighting in every generation. The battle that happened on
Oct. 10, 680 didn’t just fight for good, but it also fought for peace, truth and justice.
"The Battle of Karbala" is this sad story I read every year on the 10th of Muharram; it happened between the Benu Umayya clan and the Benu Hashem clan.
Yazid ibn Muāwiya ibn Abi Sufyan, (Benu Umayya clan) was a dictator that had no fairness in his ruling, and Imam Al-Husain (Benu Hashem clan) was Prophet Muhammad's grandson that fought against evil. Imam Al-Husain refused to pledge allegiance to Yazid. Imam Al-Husain's camp was surrounded by Yazid's soldiers and water supplies were cut from Imam Husain's companions and family. What makes this worrier my top roll model is that nothing stopped Imam Al-Husain from fighting against tyranny. Imam Al-Husain suffered and sacrificed so much in that battle that even his infant was arrowed in the chest and killed. Imam Husain was killed in a criminal way that no words can explain. Each time I read the words in this book my eyes water. Terrorist in till this day are killing and bombing people in Iraq because they love this worrier and visit his grave each year. He taught many Iraqi people to fight for justice and never give up. Each time I finish the story I feel happy and sad. I feel happy because the falsehood of Benu Umayya clan appeared to be triumphant over the truth, and that was Imam Al-Husain's goal, but I felt sad on all the suffering and killing that happened.
One of the other reasons why I really like the story of "The Battle of Karbala" is because after all that suffering that happened against tyranny Benu Umayya clan did kill the good people, but they didn’t cut all the good roots.
Al-Mukhtār Al-Thaqafī is the good root I was talking about. He was my hero that killed Imam Al-Husain's killers. He was against Umayyad Caliphs , and he also fought for peace. That made me really believe that evil people can never get away on the things they do.
All these worriers were killed because they said no to humiliation and injustice. What makes these three stories similar to me is that they all talk about famous and holy people. They taught me to be patience for the sake of truth, and to have faith in God.
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I proofread for wording errors and grammar, but I need help to check if my grammar is proper now.
I personally respect every religion, and I love reading holy books. Holy books inspire many people and teach us important morals and stories about everyday life. They have helped me understand the purpose of our existence in this world. I read the Quran every day to learn and gain inspiration. While reading the Quran is a religious practice for me, I also read other religious texts to acquire knowledge.
The Quran contains many stories that inspire me, but one story that I particularly adore is the story of Maryam, also known as Mary. Maryam is mentioned in the Quran, Bible, and many other holy books, each providing unique viewpoints and stories about her. What makes her story special to me is that she is the only woman mentioned by name in the Quran. Additionally, I am captivated by how Maryam inspires people from different religions and languages. Through her story, she has taught me the values of patience and having faith in God.
I am fascinated by stories of miracles and firmly believe that they can happen. Witnessing a miracle is one of my wishes that I believe will come true. Knowing my love for strange, miraculous, and true stories, my dad got me a book called "ÇáÞÕÕ ÇáÛÑíÈå" (Weird Stories) during his trip to Lebanon. This book contains hundreds of miraculous events witnessed by people. Specifically, it explores stories where individuals had the incredible experience of meeting Imam Al-Mahdi, the grandson of Prophet Mohammad.
Shīa Muslims believe that Imam Al-Mahdi is alive, hidden, and will eventually return to bring justice to the world. He disappeared thousands of years ago, and people have faith that he will come back. One of the stories in the book I received talks about a lady with cancer who prayed to Imam Al-Mahdi for help, and miraculously met him in Mecca. He advised her to drink Zamzam Water, and she was subsequently cured from cancer. Many others also found salvation through this man, further solidifying my belief in his existence in this world.
The eternal struggle between good and evil persists through generations. The Battle of Karbala on Oct. 10, 680, not only fought for good but also aimed to establish peace, truth, and justice. Each year on the 10th of Muharram, I read this sorrowful story that unfolded between the Benu Umayya clan and the Benu Hashem clan.
Yazid ibn Muāwiya ibn Abi Sufyan, representing the Benu Umayya clan, was a dictator whose ruling lacked fairness. Imam Al-Husain, belonging to the Benu Hashem clan and Prophet Muhammad's grandson, valiantly fought against evil. Imam Al-Husain refused to pledge allegiance to Yazid. Sadly, Imam Al-Husain's camp was surrounded by Yazid's soldiers, and his companions and family were deprived of water. What makes Imam Al-Husain my ultimate role model is his unwavering determination in fighting against tyranny. He endured immense suffering and sacrificed so much in that battle, with even his infant being struck and killed by arrows. The tragic manner in which Imam Husain was killed cannot be adequately described in words. Each time I read about this battle, tears well up in my eyes. To this day, terrorists continue to kill and bomb people in Iraq due to their love for Imam Al-Husain and their annual visits to his grave. He taught many Iraqi people to fight for justice and to never give up. Upon finishing the story, I feel a mix of happiness and sadness. I am happy because Imam Al-Husain's goal of exposing the falsehood of the Benu Umayya clan was achieved, but I am deeply saddened by the immense suffering and loss of lives that occurred.
Another reason why I greatly appreciate the story of the Battle of Karbala is that, despite the preponderance of suffering inflicted by the Benu Umayya clan, they did not completely eradicate all the virtuous individuals. Al-Mukhtār Al-Thaqafī represents the good that persisted. He was my hero, as he sought justice by taking revenge on Imam Al-Husain's killers and opposing the Umayyad Caliphs. His fight for peace further reinforced my belief that evil individuals will ultimately face consequences for their actions.
These warriors were slain because they refused to accept humiliation and injustice. What unites these three stories, in my eyes, is that they revolve around famous and holy individuals who taught me the importance of patience for the sake of truth and faith in God.