posted by Mike .
Ms Sue, can you please check my post until Writeacher comes back? I would be extremely grateful to you.
I need to rephrase this sentence.
1)Give a detailed description of Winston Smith as he appears in the opening to George Orwell's 1984. Refer to the place where he lives, the instrument used by the party to monitor his life, and his job within the party.
Looks good to me.