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Homework Help: English

Posted by zahra on Wednesday, June 6, 2012 at 3:21pm.

Hi,

I need help seeing if I corrected the following correctly.

Incorrect:
This is getting boring. I killed Hook no pirates, no adventures, and no one to boss around. I need to find a new adventure, but away from Neverland." Peter said.

My correction:

This is getting boring. I killed Hook no pirates, no adventures, and no
one to boss around. I need to find a new adventure, but away from
Neverland," said Peter.



Incorrect:
"Margaret, I need to talk to Margaret and tell her." Peter said.

My correction:
"Margaret, I need to talk to Margaret and tell her," Peter said.

Incorrect:
Peter sat near Margaret's window waiting for her.

When she entered the nursery Peter opened the window and came in.

"Margaret, I need a new adventure I feel bored and lonely." Peter said.

My correction:

Peter sat near Margaret's window waiting for her. When she entered the nursery Peter opened the window and came in.

"Margaret, I need a new adventure I feel bored and lonely," Peter said.

Incorrect:
"Peter, how about you live with us we can have great adventures here." Margaret said.

My correction:

"Peter, how about you live with us we can have great adventures here," Margaret said.

Incorrect:

"But you know how mothers are your mother would never agree." Peter said.

"Peter, I am sure she would love you to live with us." Margaret said.

My correction:
"But you know how mothers are your mother would never agree," Peter said.

"Peter, I am sure she would love you to live with us," Margaret said.

Incorrect:
"I don't know I don't like the feeling of hearing that." Peter said.

"Just leave it to me I'll ask am sure she wouldn't mind." Margaret said.

"Peter he would grow and we will send him to school, and then to an office, soon he would be a man" Jody said one-night.

My correction:

"I don't know I don't like the feeling of hearing that," Peter said.

"Just leave it to me I'll ask am sure she wouldn't mind," Margaret said.

"Peter he will grow and we will send him to school, and then to an office, soon he would be a man," Jody said one-night.

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