Posted by Maria on Tuesday, June 5, 2012 at 6:33am.
The content is fine.
Fix the comma splices:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm#splice
Ask someone to read it aloud to you so you find where words are missing.
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