Posted by Liz on Tuesday, May 29, 2012 at 1:08pm.
One thing to get under control is your overuse of prepositions and other words. Here are my corrections for you:
I wrote a sentence which I think has incorrect sentence structure...
When his daughter told us what he said, we promised that we would all help him and make him feel like family.
Can you find the differences? Let me know if you have questions about the changes I made.
Thanks. I forgot the comma ansd i used tha present tense when it is supposed to be the past tense.
I also omitted the unnecessary words. Do you notice what I omitted?
May i have your name exactly appears on your credit card?
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