Posted by ♫♫Colton♫♫ on Monday, May 21, 2012 at 7:33pm.
It's good!
The only thing I'd change is:
Line 3: Died from fighting
Line 4: Honored for their bravery
It says for line 3 for it to be action verbs and end with ing.
And for line 4 it says for it to be words that describe feeling.
Does it always have to end with ing and is line 4 describing feeling?
OK. You're right. Please ignore my suggestion for 3.
I think 4 describes feeling.
So line 3 is Dying from fighting and line 4 is Honored for their bravery?
Yes.
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