Posted by John on Sunday, May 20, 2012 at 6:13am.
1. OK
2. ... thirty-two letters ...
3. run-on; do you see how to fix it?
I'm not sure about your question in parentheses. Do you mean that the author simply told the story through the letters, in their chronological sequence?
4. ... angry with him ... bursts into ...
5. comma needed; ... into the next room ...
6. ... poor were affected ... and typhus.
http://earthquake.usgs.gov/earthquakes/eventpage/usb0009tk0#summary
I know this isn't near you, but you may have felt it anyway. I used to live in California, and I felt them frequently!
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