Please check my journal entry to see if it's good and if there any grammar mistakes. This is an assignment for English.
Art Therapist
When I was doing some research on the computer two weeks ago, I saw the word "art therapist". For a moment I thought being a Art Therapist would be stupid. I done some research on it and it's very interesting. I realize that when I grow up I want to become an art therapist. An Art Therapist is an arts, writing, music or drama therapist who uses their chosen art form to work therapeutically with people who are experiencing physical, mental, emotional and social difficulties. As an expressive medium, art can be used to help clients communicate, overcome stress and explore different aspects of their own personality. The job involves working with people with emotional problems, people suffering from trauma and people with disabilities. Art therapists also work with people undergoing medical treatment, people undergoing rehabilitation and terminally ill people. The therapists may work with children, teenagers, older individuals, couples, families, groups and communities (got info from wise geek and NHS website)
For example, there is a teenage girl name Carly and her life is not going so well. Her boyfriend dumps her, she making bad decisions in her life (like smoking, or getting suspended from school, etc.). and she's very emotionality upset. Then, her parents makes a appointment for art therapy. So pretend I was the art therapist and when she comes in, she explains to me about her problems in her life and then I assign her to draw pictures that come to her mind when she's upset and create journal entries about her daily life. Then I give her advice blah blah blah. When she comes back about a week or so she says thanks blah blah .... I moved on from my boyfriend and try to make good decides next time blah blah blah. It's something like that.
I sometimes help my friends with their problems and give them advice but I don't help them using art. I love art (and writing) a lot which I'm passion about. Sometimes when I'm emotionality upset about something that happens at school or home, I usually (SOMETIMES!) do art work to get my mind off from it or write. I want to help people express their selves in art. I think it's a good career for me (but I'm still going to be an artist and an writer).
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Ms. Sue I have to go to bed soon.
Art Therapist
When I was doing some research on the computer two weeks ago, I saw the words, "art therapist". For a moment I thought being an art therapist would be stupid. I did some research on it and it's very interesting. I realize that when I grow up I want to become an art therapist. An rt therapist an arts, writing, music or drama therapist who uses his or her chosen art form to work therapeutically with people who are experiencing physical, mental, emotional and social difficulties. As an expressive medium, art can be used to help clients communicate, overcome stress and explore different aspects of their own personality. The job involves working with people with emotional problems, people suffering from trauma and people with disabilities. Art therapists also work with people undergoing medical treatment, people undergoing rehabilitation and terminally ill people. The therapists may work with children, teenagers, older individuals, couples, families, groups and communities (got info from wise geek and NHS website) You need to put the exact words in quotation marks!
For example, there is a teenage girl name Carly and her life is not going so well. Her boyfriend dumps her, she is making bad decisions in her life (like smoking, or getting suspended from school, etc.). and she's very emotionally upset. Then, her parents makes a appointment for art therapy. So pretend I was the art therapist and when she comes in, she explains to me about her problems in her life and then I assign her to draw pictures that come to her mind when she's upset and create journal entries about her daily life. Then I give her advice blah blah blah. When she comes back about a week or so she says thanks blah blah .... I moved on from my boyfriend and try to make good decisions next time blah blah blah. It's something like that.
I sometimes help my friends with their problems and give them advice but I don't help them using art. I love art (and writing) a lot which I'm passionate about. Sometimes when I'm emotionality upset about something that happens at school or home, I usually do art work to get my mind off it or write. I want to help people express themselves in art. I think it's a good career for me (but I'm still going to be an artist and an writer).
An art therapist is
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Here is a revised version of your journal entry with some grammar corrections:
Art Therapist
When I was doing some research on the computer two weeks ago, I came across the term "art therapist". At first, I thought being an art therapist would be silly, but after conducting some research, I found it to be very interesting. I realized that when I grow up, I want to become an art therapist.
An art therapist is someone who uses their chosen art form, such as visual arts, writing, music, or drama, to provide therapeutic assistance to individuals facing physical, mental, emotional, and social difficulties. Art serves as an expressive medium that can help clients communicate, reduce stress, and explore different aspects of their personality.
Art therapists work with various individuals, including those with emotional problems, trauma survivors, individuals with disabilities, people undergoing medical treatment or rehabilitation, and terminally ill patients. They may also work with children, teenagers, older individuals, couples, families, groups, and communities. I gathered this information from Wise Geek and the NHS website.
For instance, let's imagine a teenage girl named Carly, who is going through a difficult time in her life. She recently experienced a breakup, makes poor decisions like smoking or getting suspended from school, and feels emotionally distraught. In this scenario, her parents schedule an appointment for art therapy. Now let's pretend that I am the art therapist. When Carly comes in, she explains her challenges, and I assign her to create drawings that reflect her feelings during moments of distress and to write journal entries about her daily life. Then, I provide her with guidance and support. When she returns after a week or so, she expresses her gratitude and shares how she has moved on from her boyfriend and aims to make better decisions in the future. The outcome is something along those lines.
While I do enjoy helping my friends by giving them advice, I haven't incorporated art into my support. Nevertheless, I have a deep passion for art (and writing). Whenever I feel emotionally upset about something that occurs at school or home, I usually turn to art or writing (occasionally!) to divert my mind. I aspire to assist people in expressing themselves through art. I believe this career path aligns well with my goals, even though I still plan to pursue my passion as an artist and writer.