Posted by John on Wednesday, May 16, 2012 at 3:31am.
2. comma needed
3. comma needed
4. "in Greece" is correct. "to Greece" would be correct if you omit "to the seaside"
5. school
6. "I would like to tell you..." = better, yes.
7. "Firstly" is not a word -- use "First" -- also a comma is needed in here.
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