Posted by John on Sunday, May 13, 2012 at 6:04pm.
1. delete "it"
5. use "stole" instead of "has stolen"
7. "French" (capital F)
That last one in 8 is awkward. It'd be smoother to write this: He probably visited them...
Everything else is fine.
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