posted by Mark on .
I would like you to check my sentences, please. Thank you, Writeacher.
1) Describe Dr. Jekyll’s experiment, his process of transformation and the main contrasting features of Dr Jeyll’s new self. (I want to point out the difference between Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde in their physical aspect. Edward Hyde is pure hate and evil; he is pale and dwarfish, yet his hands are dark and hairy. He is described in terms of animal imagery etc. Etc,)
I would add "including" after "experiment" in order to delineate the main ideas you want students to include in their papers.