Posted by Mark on Thursday, May 10, 2012 at 7:49am.
1. "lose" wouldst be a mistake, yes!
In 2, use "the" instead of "they."
4. ... where he could get some change. ("change" refers to coins instead of bills)
All the rest is fine.
*would* (my typo!)
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