Posted by kate on Sunday, May 6, 2012 at 1:31pm.
No, it's not a run on sentence, but it is awkward.
How should I fix it?
Use the active voice.
Parvana made an important decision when she went outside to buy food while she was dressed as a boy.
Thank you Ms.Sue
You're welcome, Kate.
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