posted by kate on .
Is this sentence a run on?
An important decision made by Parvana was when Parvana agreed to go outside to buy food while she was dressed as a boy.
No, it's not a run on sentence, but it is awkward.
How should I fix it?
Use the active voice.
Parvana made an important decision when she went outside to buy food while she was dressed as a boy.
Thank you Ms.Sue
You're welcome, Kate.