Posted by jo on Tuesday, May 1, 2012 at 8:57pm.
I'll get you started.
This summer I will be going to a theme park with my best friend. It will be fun because I like to go with friends. I've never been to this theme park before.
You try to correct the rest of this paragraph and post it here. I'll be glad to check it for you.
This summer my best friend and I will be going to a theme park. I always enjoy myself when I am with my friend so I am sure that the trip will be fun. I have yet to go to this theme park, and according to one of my classmates it holds the worlds highest coaster. I cant wait for our trip to the theme park!
Careful! There are errors in James' version.
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