posted by jo on .
this summer I will be going to a theme park with my best friend will go too. It will be fun. Because I like when I get to go with friends. I've never been to this theme park before I heard it is very fun. Someone in my class. ITold me that there is a rollercoaster that is the tallest in the whole wide world I can hardly even wait to ride it it will be great. can you tell me how to fix this it has ron-on sentences and fragament sentences make it right
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This summer I will be going to a theme park with my best friend. It will be fun because I like to go with friends. I've never been to this theme park before.
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This summer my best friend and I will be going to a theme park. I always enjoy myself when I am with my friend so I am sure that the trip will be fun. I have yet to go to this theme park, and according to one of my classmates it holds the worlds highest coaster. I cant wait for our trip to the theme park!
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