Homework Help: english

Posted by Jon on Thursday, April 26, 2012 at 1:23pm.

This is my intro paragraph for my research paper about the importance of numbers in the bible. How is it, please offer some suggestions too, thanks:

As I was reading the Old Testament, I noticed the use of different numbers and was curious about their significance. Numerology’s an important aspect of the Bible but should be looked at carefully. Certain numbers are used in patterns and others aren’t mentioned as much. Numbers can be used to represent important concepts like various prophecies or laws. They can be used to refer to the chapter and verse in the Bible as well. Numbers have had an impact on the lives of figures in the scriptures, some more than others. Through research I will be able to have a better understanding of the Bible in general.

english - Writeacher, Thursday, April 26, 2012 at 2:17pm
#1 - get rid of all "I" references in a formal paper.

#2 - I have no idea if it's good or not. You can write a brilliant intro that has no little or no connection to the whole paper. Have you already written your paper? I sure hope so!

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