I have to write a argment Paper and it is based on Native Americans traditional culture and beliefs are or are not valuable in today's world. I want to write a paper on how Sioux, Kiowa, and Cheeroke related.

I don't know it this is a good thesis: Native American Culture reflect the center, Native American belief that is connected spiritually and should therefore be treated thoughtfully. Each culture illustartes the values, benefits and beliefs.
Please help. I been trying to figure it out my thesis.

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These are FACTS, not thesis statements.
Native American Culture reflect the center, Native American belief that is connected spiritually and should therefore be treated thoughtfully. Each culture illustartes the values, benefits and beliefs.

Did you read what I posted before? Read and study and follow ALL directions.

Your thesis statement is a good start, but it could be more specific and focused. Here's a revised thesis statement for your paper:

"The traditional cultures and beliefs of the Sioux, Kiowa, and Cherokee tribes are valuable in today's world as they reflect the spiritual interconnectedness and promote thoughtful treatment of the natural world. Through an examination of their values, benefits, and beliefs, this paper aims to demonstrate the relevance and importance of Native American culture in contemporary society."

This revised thesis statement maintains the core idea of your original thesis while providing more clarity and specificity on the tribes you will be focusing on. It also highlights the specific aspects you will explore in your paper, such as values, benefits, and beliefs, which will help guide your research and organization.

Remember, your thesis statement should act as a roadmap for your paper, informing the reader of the main argument you will be making and the key points you will be discussing.