I have to write a argment Paper and it is based on Native Americans traditional culture.
I don't know it this is a good thesis: Although Native Americans face challenges, they keep their tradition alive.
That's not a thesis statement. It's a statement of fact.
Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)
http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/
Read carefully and follow ALL directions.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.
And ... here is the best website for helping you write a good argumentative paper:
http://www.powa.org
Click on Argumentative Essays (across the top) and follow the directions!
Your thesis statement is a good starting point for your argument paper on Native Americans' traditional culture. It clearly presents the main idea you will argue in your paper - that despite the challenges faced by Native Americans, they manage to preserve and maintain their traditional culture.
To further develop your thesis statement, you can consider providing specific examples of the challenges faced by Native Americans and how they navigate those challenges to keep their traditions alive. This will help strengthen your argument and provide evidence to support your thesis.
Additionally, remember that your thesis statement should be concise, clear, and arguable. It should act as a roadmap for your paper and guide your reader to understand the main point you will discuss throughout the essay.
Remember to conduct thorough research to gather relevant information and evidence to support your thesis statement. Good luck with your argument paper!