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Homework Help: Grammar

Posted by Jenny on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 at 2:42pm.

Proofreading: This paragraph just sounds awkward to me to begin with.

Carina was inspected at that time, which appeared sharp with no mucosal lesions noted. 2% Lidocaine was instilled over the carina. Right main stem bronchus was inspected next. Opening to the right upper lobe was inspected, however 2 areas of abnormality were detected. All 3 anterior, posterior, and apical, segments were visualized without any obstruction noted.

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Carina was inspected at that time, which appeared sharp with no mucosal lesions noted. Two percent lidocaine was instilled over the carina. Right main stem bronchus was inspected next. Opening to the right upper lobe was inspected; however, two areas of abnormality were detected. All three anterior, posterior, and apical segments were visualized without any obstruction noted.

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