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Homework Help: English

Posted by Matthew on Sunday, April 15, 2012 at 1:06pm.

Writeacher, can you help me check these sentences? Thank you very much for
your invaluable help!

5)After making sure a person is a Prisoner of Conscience, the organization starts sending letters to governments and benefits (food, medicine) to the prisoner. (better: to the prisoner and his family).
6) Local groups operate sending letters to contact people (??) and they collect signatures and raise money to buy goods and other things that could be useful to the prisoners and their families. When someone is known to be a prisoner of conscience, he is handed over to a local group.
7) It aims to help all prisoners of conscience; in fact, it fights for the release of these innocent people who are in prison for their ideas. This organization is also against the (better without the?) death penalty, the torture (without the) and the degrading treatment of prisoners. It tries to obtain trial (better “immediate and fair trial) for all political prisoners who are detained without charge.

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