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Posted by on Thursday, April 12, 2012 at 9:14pm.

How is my grammar and punctuation in the folowing paragraph?
Picture this, you are taking a test and the person next to you is chewing their gum loudly,so you can't concentrate. How disrespectful is that? The school board needs to make a rule no chewing gum in school.

  • English - , Thursday, April 12, 2012 at 9:26pm

    The first "sentence" is a run on.

    The third sentence needs additional punctuation or words.

  • English - , Thursday, April 12, 2012 at 9:39pm

    Picture this. You are taking a test and the person next to you is chewing their gum loudly. You can't concentrate. How disrepectful is that? The school board should have rules for no gum at school.

  • English - , Thursday, April 12, 2012 at 9:43pm

    That is much better! :-)

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