Posted by Dakota on Thursday, April 12, 2012 at 9:14pm.
The first "sentence" is a run on.
The third sentence needs additional punctuation or words.
Picture this. You are taking a test and the person next to you is chewing their gum loudly. You can't concentrate. How disrepectful is that? The school board should have rules for no gum at school.
That is much better! :-)
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