Homework Help: English

Posted by Matthew on Wednesday, April 11, 2012 at 2:19pm.

I still have to check a few other sentences on the same subject. Thank you very much in advance,Writeacher.
In particular sentences 4-5-6.

1) If I work at the passion, then it is the job itself that motivates me.
2) I will take up working tomorrow. (is this sentence possible?)
3) If I work at a job I don't expect that my career will take off.
4) I would like to work at a passion because the job is a very important of life (in a person’s life) and I’d like to be happy and satisfied.
5) I’d also like to work at a career because it’s important in my opinion to have development opportunities and become an important person.
6) I think who work at a job do not fell fulfilled because he works only at a salary and this can give him a lot of stress. In my opinion, the right approach to work is being determined.
7) If a person works at a career, the prospects of promotion and development opportunities are the most appealing.

English - Writeacher, Wednesday, April 11, 2012 at 2:37pm
1) If I work at my passion, then it is the job itself that motivates me.

2) I will take up working tomorrow. (is this sentence possible?) It sounds strange. I'd just write, "I will start working tomorrow."

3) If I am just working at a job, I don't expect that my career will take off.

4) I would like to work at my passion, not just a job, because I’d like to be happy and satisfied.

5) I’d also like to carve out my career because I think it’s important to have a satisfying life and future.

6) I think people who simply work at a job do not feel fulfilled because they work only for a salary and this can produce a lot of stress. In my opinion, the right approach to work is being determined. <~~I'm not sure what you mean in the last sentence.

7) If a person works at a career, the prospects of promotion and development opportunities are the most appealing. <~~very well done

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