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1.Business has an inordinate influence on governmental operations.
2. Our expectaions are that there will be increasement in commodity value.
3. Can we assertain the types of customers that have a predisposition to utilize our instant- credit offer?
4. the preponderance of the business people we consulted envision signs of improvement from the current siege of economics stagnation?
5. if liquidation becomes mandatory, we shall dispose of these assets first?