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My, My, Myy

My, my, my
The world running by
Way too fast for your eye
Could we slow it down
Just to say good bye
Or am i even justified
Because of all the lies
Can we slow it down
Or will we just die?

My, my, my
I will miss my life as the days go by
And yet,
Try as i might
I still wont ever cry

How is this? I wrote it by myself and wanted some comments.

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    thanks to any and all comments

  • poetry, please comment -

    ........ ummm how old are you between the ages 12-15 or 16-19? I'm asking cause it sounds nice plus with this well whatever age you are I think you deserve more than the comments my dear congrats it's like my first love & my pain now put into your poem nice one

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    Amazing poem. Seriously. Try to get it published. This is one of the most amazing poems I have ever heard.

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    Thats is really good.

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    thank you all. im only 12, almost 13. down below you can see more of my poetry and some has been published

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    That's a good poem ;D keep it up!

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