March 29, 2015

Homework Help: poetry, please comment

Posted by i♥zee on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 at 2:31pm.

My, My, Myy

My, my, my
The world running by
Way too fast for your eye
Could we slow it down
Just to say good bye
Or am i even justified
Because of all the lies
Can we slow it down
Or will we just die?

My, my, my
I will miss my life as the days go by
And yet,
Try as i might
I still wont ever cry

How is this? I wrote it by myself and wanted some comments.

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