Posted by i♥zee on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 at 2:31pm.
My, My, Myy
My, my, my
The world running by
Way too fast for your eye
Could we slow it down
Just to say good bye
Or am i even justified
Because of all the lies
Can we slow it down
Or will we just die?
My, my, my
I will miss my life as the days go by
Try as i might
I still wont ever cry
How is this? I wrote it by myself and wanted some comments.
poetry, please comment - i♥zee, Tuesday, March 27, 2012 at 2:36pm
thanks to any and all comments
poetry, please comment - MM, Tuesday, March 27, 2012 at 2:50pm
........ ummm how old are you between the ages 12-15 or 16-19? I'm asking cause it sounds nice plus with this well whatever age you are I think you deserve more than the comments my dear congrats it's like my first love & my pain now put into your poem nice one
poetry, please comment - SoccerStar, Tuesday, March 27, 2012 at 3:44pm
Amazing poem. Seriously. Try to get it published. This is one of the most amazing poems I have ever heard.
poetry, please comment - Ness, Tuesday, March 27, 2012 at 3:53pm
Thats is really good.
poetry, please comment - i♥zee, Tuesday, March 27, 2012 at 6:58pm
thank you all. im only 12, almost 13. down below you can see more of my poetry and some has been published
poetry, please comment - Ms. Simpsonizer, Thursday, April 5, 2012 at 10:58am
That's a good poem ;D keep it up!
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