Posted by Matthew on Sunday, March 25, 2012 at 12:29pm.
5. What is meant by "broken up" here?
6. Check spelling; "have broken"
8. Check spelling; comma after "himself"
second 7. Please double-check all the words; this doesn't make sense.
second 8. First sentence is OK. Second sentence doesn't make sense. Using "When" in place of "What" will work.
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