February 21, 2017

Homework Help: English

Posted by Matthew on Tuesday, March 20, 2012 at 6:02pm.

Can you please check these other sentences,too? Thank you.

1) Every detail in the novel is accounted for in the most precise manner.
2) Friday's physical traits are similar to those of a European.
Friday doesn't believe in God so he is not Christian. Friday is not Christian but he believes in his own God.
3) Robinson has the role to teach him English. Robinson believes that teaching Friday is part of his duties as a colonizer.
4)During a mission of exploration Friday saves the life of Friday, called like that because of the day the savage was saved. (I need to rephrase this sentence)
5)You are never consistent in the use of tenses. Don't switch from the present to the past.
The characters are presented from the inside of the story ("of the story" is not correct?)
6) You wrote a number of incorrect sentences both from the point view of the grammar as from that of the content.
How would you describe the following grammar mistakes: "he feed hisself because he learn how to cultivate the land"?They refer to morphology.
7)He has a very sweet look like a European's.
The author employed first person narration (only) to pretend it to be a true story.

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