Posted by Matthew on Tuesday, March 20, 2012 at 4:43pm.
The only changes I'd make are these:
- add a comma after "setting" in the second sentence.
- use "point of view" in place of "kind of narrator" if you are expecting the answer to include "first person" or "third person," etc.
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