Saturday
October 25, 2014

Homework Help: English

Posted by Matthew on Sunday, March 18, 2012 at 10:52am.

Could you please check these sentences?
Thank you very much, Writeacher.

1) Your paragraphs show a good knowledge of the literary contents. As to the grammar, you are still unsure in the use of tenses and prepositions.
2) As to cohesion, you failed to write an introduction or a conclusion to your paragraphs and didn't link your ideas through sentence connectors.
3) Your paragraphs also contain a number of repetitions.
4)Friday's hair isn't curled like savages one. Possible corrections: it isn't as curled as that of the savages is. It isn't curled like that of a savage (a black man is possible?/that of savages.
5) His stronk legs make him resemble a European (also a European man?).
He also start a goat farm because he was running (correction: is running) out of gunpowder.
6) He also has/He has also a round face..(?)Then his nose (when adding a new physical trait I would have used "Furthermore/In addition) isn't flat like that of a negro but quite small.

Answer this Question

First Name:
School Subject:
Answer:

Related Questions

English - Could you please check these last few sentences, please? Thank you in ...
English - Thank you, Writeacher. Here are some other sentences I need you to ...
English - Writeacher, could you please check the last two paragraphs I posted. I...
English grammar check please - If someone could check these sentences for me ...
English - Could you please recommend me a site where students can learn how to ...
English - Can you check the grammar in these two sentences, please? Thank you. 1...
English - Is there a site where it can accurately check grammar? I use the the ...
English - Can you please tell me if the term "overreacher" is appropiate is ...
English - Grammar check - Could someone check these sentences to make sure they ...
To Writeacher - Writeacher, you are the only Jiskha tutor I see on here right ...

Search
Members