i just need some checking on my sentences if there is something wrong. thank you
Ranchers and farmers are competitively trying to reduce their cost in many ways. This strategy reduces the quality of the product which brings problem to the food. Each year, many Americans are dying from E. coli bacteria, salmonella and other deadly bacteria in food.
Both "product" and "product" should be plural.
The rest is o.k.
thanks
You're welcome.
Sure, I can help you with that! Here's a review of your sentences:
1. "Ranchers and farmers are competitively trying to reduce their cost in many ways." - This sentence looks grammatically correct. However, to improve clarity, you might consider specifying what costs they are trying to reduce. For example, you could say "Ranchers and farmers are competitively trying to reduce production costs" or "Ranchers and farmers are competitively trying to reduce their operating expenses."
2. "This strategy reduces the quality of the product which brings problem to the food." - The phrasing here could be improved for clarity. Instead, you could say "However, this strategy often results in a reduction in the quality of the product, which poses problems for the food industry." This revision clearly states the cause and effect relationship and clarifies that the problems are faced by the food industry.
3. "Each year, many Americans are dying from E. coli bacteria, salmonella, and other deadly bacteria in food." - This sentence is grammatically correct. However, to enhance clarity, you could consider adding some context. For example, you could say "Each year, many Americans are dying from foodborne illnesses caused by pathogens such as E. coli bacteria, salmonella, and other deadly bacteria." Including the term "foodborne illnesses" clarifies that these deaths are a result of consuming contaminated food.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you have any more sentences you would like me to review.