posted by Matthew on .
Can you have a look at these sentences, please?
1. I’m emailing you the list of students, who are looking forward to starting the email partnership. As you can see, there are 25 pupils, coming from different classes and age groups. Do you think you can find other 4 pupils from your school? If not, I will exclude four from the list.
Remove the comma after "students"
... Do you think you can find 4 more students ... ?