Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry on Friday, March 9, 2012 at 6:37pm.

Writeacher, I really need your help to check some mistakes in the word choice:

1) He lives alone because his wedding is broken.
2) It is impossible to switch off the telescreen fully (better completely)
3)The Thoughtpolice observe people 24 hours a day.
4) He is watching on the telescreen a report on the production of pig-iron and the realization of the Ninth Three-Year Plan (of the Party).
5) He changes past events so that to comply with what the Party has told (better: so as to comply with/match (both possible?) the Party's official version of past events).
6) Winston's thoughts (??) change during the novel, in particular at the end of it(???).
7) When O'Brien relizes Winston's behaviour is against the Party, he has him captured by the Thoughtpolice.
8) O'Brien begins to threaten Winston in order to make him doublethink (in order to alter his ability to think independently).

English - Writeacher, Friday, March 9, 2012 at 7:33pm
1) He lives alone because his marriage is over.

2) It is impossible to switch off the telescreen completely.

3)OK

4) He is watching a report on the telescreen about the production of pig-iron and the realization of the Ninth Three-Year Plan of the Party.

5) He changes past events to comply with the Party's official version of past events.

6) Winston's ideas change during the novel, in particular at the end.

7) When O'Brien realizes Winston's behaviour is against the Party, O'Brien makes sure Winston is captured by the Thoughtpolice.

8) O'Brien begins to threaten Winston in order to alter his ability to think independently.

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