Posted by Celest on .
now check this.
THERE ONCE WAS A CLASS NAMED 210
THEY KEPT TALKING AND TALKING AGAIN
MRS.BESDEN CAME INSIDE
AND ALL THEIR EYES WERE OPENED WIDE
AND THERE WAS SILENCE THEN
TO MS.SUE -
Good. It would be better if you dropped the word "and" in the fourth and fifth lines.