Homework Help: TO MS.SUE

Posted by Celest on Monday, March 5, 2012 at 7:24pm.

now check this.

THERE ONCE WAS A CLASS NAMED 210
THEY KEPT TALKING AND TALKING AGAIN
MRS.BESDEN CAME INSIDE
AND ALL THEIR EYES WERE OPENED WIDE
AND THERE WAS SILENCE THEN

TO MS.SUE - Ms. Sue, Monday, March 5, 2012 at 7:26pm
Good. It would be better if you dropped the word "and" in the fourth and fifth lines.

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