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Writeacher, I included a few sentences for you to check. I wonder if you coud help me organize my ideas more clearly.

1) Winston is tortoured by the Thoughtpolice and threatened that he will be attacked by rats, the thing which he hates most.
2) They make him believe that white is black and vice versa (they alter Winston's view of reality). His ability to think genuine emotions is completely eroded.
3) Thank you for answering my email so quickly.
4) All my students from class eleven (they are sixteen years old) are enthusiastic about the idea of corresponding with their Irish parners.
5) I'm including their class email address so that your students can start sending them their first emails.
6) It would be nice if your students could introduce themselves, talking about their daily routines and the things they are interested in. In this way, I can select students with similar (or matching??) interests.
7) It is important that they find topics they both like.As to mobility of both teachers and students, I would like to know if your school has already been involved in a similar project.
8) One last thing, would it possible to organize English summer courses at your school for groups of students (to be held in July or August)?
Have you already organized them? How much would the course and the accommodation for each student cost?

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    1) Winston is tortured by the Thoughtpolice, who threatened to attack him with rats, the thing he hates most.

    2) They alter Winston's view of reality, making him believe that white is black and vice versa. His ability to feel genuine emotions is completely eroded.

    3) OK

    4) All my 16-year-old students in class eleven are enthusiastic about the idea of corresponding with their Irish partners.

    5) OK

    6) It would be nice if your students could introduce themselves, telling about their daily routines and the things they are interested in. In this way, I can select students with similar interests.

    7) It is important that they find topics they both like. As to mobility of both teachers and students, I would like to know if your school has already been involved in a similar project.
    I'm not sure "mobility" is the most accurate word to use here. It would probably be better to rephrase the first part of that sentence like this: As to student- and teacher-exchanges, ...

    8) One last thing: Would it possible to organize English summer courses at your school for groups of students? Have you already organized them? How much would the course and the accommodation for each student cost?

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